This match up was very intriguing to say the least.
Vator, I am impressed with what you wrote this week. It's been awhile since I've peeped a verse from you and from what I read here, I can see you have definitely gotten better from last season, though you still carry that poor grammatical trait with you to this very day, but I won't pound you on that. I actually thought outside of those minor hiccups, you put together a very well thought out piece. You used the picture very well, and the details were very nice. Like another voter mentioned before me, the "pancake" thing was very random and that did sort of threw me off track. I noticed a slight transition from the deep descriptions in the beginning of your piece to a wild like finish with the pancake gist. I believe you did a good job overall though.
YDK, a very, very short piece that packed a bit of a punch. Just a bit. I'm a bit surprised you dropped such a short piece this week, maybe still reeling from the champ match outcome? While Vator had very good descriptions, your piece lacked that but I liked the tone you brought. It's obvious you wrote from possibly a personal experience? Either way, the flow of your verse brought that to life quite well, and the message was evident. I guess the only real knock I have is that it could have used more content possibly? symetrik dropped a short piece as well, but his drops are usually very, very deep despite the amount of words used. Yours wasn't as deep as his, and I'm not holding your story against his, just using it as an example, I feel you could have went in a bit more in depth.
It took me a few read throughs to make my decision, because while Vator did drop a much more content filled piece, his hiccups sort of had my head scratching, possibly a bit more than YDK's very short drop. I have to say what edged it for me is Vator's deep descriptions in the early part of his verse and his piece seemed to carry that momentum to the end despite the random pancake idea thrown in there. I feel YDK could have used a couple of lines more here to really bring it home but with what is present, Inno did enough to get my vote in the end. Good match up, though.
MVGT: Innovator. Good job by both competitors.
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