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Old 11-10-2013, 06:28 PM   #8
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Well, honestly, this sorta disappointed me as a champ match, sadly, I was expecting absolute amazementbeing who was facing off. Pretty much the major breakdowns have been said, so I'll keep it short and sweet.

J, the entire piece, until the literal last word, I had no clue what it was about. But, after realizing it was a personalized piece from Sasquatch, I got it, and I sorta liked it, there were plenty of relative nuances... But, this flow was not the usual masterpiece I'm used to from you, the reusing the same word, ehhh, should not have been done... Sasquatch ain't from the hood, he's from the wood, the rest of it was fairly decent, but, just, decent...

Frank, straight up, this was really interesting, but, terribly boring, so many things were covered, but not completed. If it would've stayed on the climate change keeping the bugs around destroying the forest, with that much insightful and intelligent detail, this would've been so much better to me...

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