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Old 11-10-2013, 11:23 AM   #7
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Inno, my wishfful thinkings is you taking shots at pancakebrah for some reason, cause I. Lol'd at at that shit.its "we're or we are", not where brother. Solid verse, read fairly mellow, I mean, somber almost. If I take. Out the few grammar errors, the verse is very solid as a read. I enjoyed it thoroughly my friend.

Sexy ass - depressed indeed. I'm going to assume this was literal, and all about ur life.. toucchingg. We all strugglle bruhv, but we don't do things because we have to, it becauuse we want to to better either ourselves or our families. I did like how you linked the. View to smoking a blunt because I do that shit, only we have these reefs of rocks that go prettyy far out and go toke on them cause less people then whharf or docks. Anywys, solid verse of emotion, flow decent, not sure of "love, ugh". Time pressed?? Pace was good, like I said, emotion drivin and you did that front well


All in all.. I got inno taking this simply for better use of topic. He. Incorporated the burnt bridge with the love and the sun rays. Good even battle.
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