[ThisisDAM]

Pancake, nice take. Kinda where I would go, although I had another idea to add. I like your style, aside from some of the rhymes felt off & it seemed you tried to find any word that kinda rhymed & wrote it. I'm probably explaining this wrong but I'm exhausted, haha. Good verse tho, I'll be reading your stuff now. Vulgar vulgar. Honestly, I don't know how you write this stuff. But honestly, it hurts you too. You write a lot of shit people reading are gonna be like huh, we may not be as evolved as you, ha this was dope but you lose me at times. Most topicals you do I thoroughly enjoy & even go back & read more, but this one lost me. Vote pancake here