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Originally Posted by Certain
@ PancakeBrah, you are obsessed with interesting rhymes and too often let them guide your verses. Your rhymes and schemes are elite level, but you're often a syllable or three too long or too short, hurting your cadence. You write about things that mean a lot to you, like pretty white girls, but you often seem to intentionally ignore the frames of reference of your readers. You like juxtaposition a bit too much. And you sometimes go on runs of trying to write like other people, but you're not zygote and don't pull it off as well as him. Also, you might be my favorite writer on this site. |
I think you recognize the zeitgeist of the site, and write accordingly, with your own particular strength for wording and grammar. If I were to write the most PancakeBrah verse possible, and you were to write the most Certain Serpent verse possible, they'd be near identical, with mine being a being a bit more real, emotional, and personable with yours a bit more refined, professional, and executed. You have a knack for wording; you are fully aware that the majority of AOWL members can't truly write to write and you take advantage. For some reason you take stock in your record and your 'vote streak', as petty as that is. I do as well. If I were to pick a doppleganger for myself on this site it'd be you, but there are differences. You are a bit more rote; I am a bit more bleeding heart. In the heart of this topic, the reason why you suck as a writer...sometimes you come off as emotion machine X in topicals. You perfect what you write but more than half the time it seems to me that its just a possible interpretation. Like, 'this verse seems like what sadness would feel like'. You write it as well as can be done, but I don't feel it. Its all a bit dry.
Also, you're probably one of my favorite writers *dullboy/bwhahha emoji*