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Old 11-09-2013, 12:19 PM   #5
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Good shit.

Inno had the way more in depth view of this topic.
Ydk had the smooth flow and sort of slacked quite a bit concerning the topic imo

Inno,
Felt you captured this better with your content. But your technical side still needs quite a bit of work. Very bumpy in schemes.

Ydk, thought you would of had an easy win here and may have predicted you over inno, but you took the lazy route imho and it hurt you here. Mechanically stronger but conceptually absent.

I'm going with inno here for a better look into the topic. You got lucky though man. If ydk would have went in stronger he would have taken this easy

V/inno. Step it up a little bit mechanically. Your ideas are dope. Execution needs work, write more om's
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