[Geno]

Great battle.

Zenland has a cool verse. His paragraph thing really fucked him though tbh. I feel like he was just rhyming and completely went astray from being able to execute a propperly thought out and directed concept. In other words, you can't propperly lead an idea into another idea when your subjecting yourself to the rhymes and flow of a verse. This was my style for years and I bounce to it for fun once in a while.. but I left it for those reasons and found that I can capture my concepts much better with a different style and format of writing.

Mike. Tbh, you took this fairly easily imo
Thought you captured the flow well, your settups and deliveries were great and added to a well executed delivery and impact of what your message was. This was, to me.. the difference between the tortoise vs the hair.. mike was the tortoise and brought his usual display of mechanics and well crafted writing, everything the reader expects in a mike verse, compared to a hair:zenland.. who's trying to perhaps show off a little in hopes of leaning the reader in his direction because of good flow and syllable play. I think that failed though

V/mike

Cool battle, think about my criticism though zen. I'm just trying to help bro