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Old 11-08-2013, 10:29 PM   #5
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dope battle. two very different takes on the topic. Zyg went scientific geno went realistic emotional story mode

zyg - this was mechanically pretty mesmerizing. as far as the direction you took the topic I was impressed. very creative take on the creation of life. I found it to be entertaining on many levels. it was thought provoking. that is imo how life did start on this planet, from some type of life form landing here on an asteroid or meteorite. good shit good verse. you did take a bit of a robotic take once again though


geno - you went for the more predictable approach to the topic. but you packed it with a ton of emotion and had a real solid flow throughout. it seemed to hit close to home for you. it was real. and it had that audio friendly cadence that I enjoy. reminded me of some slim shady talking about kim tracks. good stuff

overall- really hard battle to vote on. totally different directions taken. two real good verses. one read like a text book but was a really unique take on the topic. the other read like a venting diary page and was packed with emotion. overall I think that the smoothness of genos cadence takes it for me.


vote - geno


thanks for the reads
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