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Old 11-08-2013, 09:41 PM   #6
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Another dope drop from you, people are making feeding easy lately. Enjoyed the uhm.. what can I call it? The somewhat repetitive lines where you build on to what you started to say.

I'm talking about this shit:
everybody plays the fool .. if they're foolish enough
& this:
now apologize again, just for apologies' sake

Enjoyed the phrasing of those lines and they fit well with their previous lines as well. Kinda agree with Split about the last few lines, but overall you did a really great job with this and I enjoyed the read. Keep droppin'.
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