[Mr. J]

I'm awfully confused by the timing of the beat and lines
I feel like it throws off the whole vibe from it being said
regardless I feel like you have got done the whole...control of what you do
how you say it, and whether or not you can keep it cohesive or not
it probably works smoother for you when you do it yourself
but I feel kind of thrown off as I try to read it with the beat...
I felt after 2 minutes you went in though breh...nice work