[Mr. J]

I missed the whole battle situation, regardless this was dope
I felt if you stuck it out more you could have, would have won
I remember the whole thing being close, you did a great job regardless
I'm not sure if this was the whole piece or if it has it's parts edited out
but you did a great job with the topic given regardless...dope drop
towards the end it started to mesh together very nicely...
I didn't enjoy the opening though :(...keep writing breh