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His girl look like a body builder - w/ those biceps u know she trumpin him
Pat Buchanan’s so fuckin prominent they could sway ppl to vote Republican

As mentioned, this is forced. Buchanan is pronounced Byu-cannon, and even if it weren't - i have some issues with the wordplay, but the execution was solid

Kid’s been mid-tier forever, how his fans saying I won’t best this queer?
Fuck what a Stan Doubts… Swerve aint had ONE of those his whole text career

This is alright. The way I read it is "Fuck what a stand outs" which really doesnt make sense grammatically.

I’m dope w/ a flawless delivery, plus I’m in a line of TRUE work
U only good w/ Polish to Boot cuz ur that kid that says “shine ur shoes, sir?”

This was dope, clever, and funny

& ppl ain’t gonna sugarcoat it - they’ll say u got burnt in the fires
They’ll make no Bones about it… Just an ep of that show that ur murder inspires

This was alright...the concepts a bit corny to me, but the execution's on point

I meet girls’ every criteria that’s why I stay bedding the fairest dimes
If Swerve putting Ticks in Boxes it’s by spreading his genital parasites

Not really feeling this one, but its likely because ive seen a lot of tic and box related concepts recently

Fuck ur Australia punches, keep thinking those lines are in fine taste
At least MY version of an Outback doesn’t need corrective surgery & a spine brace

Kind of funny, but I still have some issues with the wordplay

You emotional faggot... I’ll take ur girl & enter her nookie
U got NO chance of taking Midol… that’s why you’re STILL a sensitive pussy

Also kind of funny, but I'm still iffy about this. The whole thing with "my doll" seems really 1920's and just doesn't connect quite as hard as it could

Ur scoliosis is jokes though – I know ur shit isn’t totally damned
Only reason ur Backpacks up is cuz ur a soy latte drinking fag who goes to poetry slams

Solid closer





Swerve

Of course even your sister's hypothetical, you'll be dieing alone,
Fact is you'll never see a solid 8...like lunches at nika's retirement home.

I get that it's relevant to a comment he made, but I honestly feel like this would've hit harder in the context of talking about him not being able to get women. By bringing up the quote, I feel like we're talking about how his hypothetical sister isn't even a solid 8. It really takes a lot of sting out of an otherwise dope punch

Good lines from you are few and far in between, I’m just keeping you honest,
Cause a hot barbie something Dom can’t comprehend unless he’s throwing shrimps on it.

Kind of funny, but you're hurting yourself by omitting the word "is" from the sentence "a hot barbie something dom cant comprehend"

You scare tourists away from Australia cause you’re sad and you’re shitty,
I’m wondering how the country Canberra faggot like you living near its capital city.

This is kind of like a line that Dom used where one side of your wordplay is working, but the other side isn't. The statement "The country Canberra faggot like you" makes no sense at all. I get it..."Can bare a"....but that only works on one part of the wordplay. The mistake a lot of people make is thinking that they can just throw away the context of one side and get away with it. That doesn't float with me

Your girl wanna fuck me cause she know this Potter fan is not the one,
Cause while she busy tryna tongue my parcel...you're trying to learn parseltongue.

Not really feeling this one at all to be honest. This was actually pretty below par in comparison to your other lines.

Say goodbye to your family and friends cause the kid is ruthless,
Hack him to pieces and then lay D parts in the open like a female nudist.

Meh, I'm not really feeling this. It's just too obvious and comes across as something that's probably been done thousands of times against people whose names start with "D".

Dom’s too much of a geek to touch a bitch, he doesn’t really relish hugs,
During contact, he’s got a hover technique that helicopter pilots would be jealous of.

Kind of funny. I like this

Aero had all the bars in the tag, you begged him to check yours,
While Aeropostale the good lines, you just go chasing young teens in those prep stores.

This is just forced on a lot of levels. Phonically and grammatically

Your girl loving my sex game, I had her straddling me during fall brawl,
Then she started "sitting sideways" on the pole like a stripper dancing to paul wall.

This is also a huge miss. It's down there with the parseltongue line for least favorite



Best Lines: Dom

3. You emotional faggot... I’ll take ur girl & enter her nookie
U got NO chance of taking Midol… that’s why you’re STILL a sensitive pussy

2. Ur scoliosis is jokes though – I know ur shit isn’t totally damned
Only reason ur Backpacks up is cuz ur a soy latte drinking fag who goes to poetry slams

1. I’m dope w/ a flawless delivery, plus I’m in a line of TRUE work
U only good w/ Polish to Boot cuz ur that kid that says “shine ur shoes, sir?”


Best Lines: Swerve


3. Good lines from you are few and far in between, I’m just keeping you honest,
Cause a hot barbie something Dom can’t comprehend unless he’s throwing shrimps on it.

2. Of course even your sister's hypothetical, you'll be dieing alone,
Fact is you'll never see a solid 8...like lunches at nika's retirement home.

1. Dom’s too much of a geek to touch a bitch, he doesn’t really relish hugs,
During contact, he’s got a hover technique that helicopter pilots would be jealous of





At the end of the day, Swerve had some good lines - but also had some huge misses, which Dom was consistent enough to avoid. If those two lines from swerve were replaced by lines that were at par with the rest of his verse, I think I'd have this leaning his way. But ultimately...

MVGT - Dominate