Dominate
Opener is nice. Don't see the complaints about it. I guess it may be slightly forced on Pat's boo's cannons, but it's passable, IMO. Stan Doubts was cool. I had you need to Stan decide and make a decision to drive off a bridge like he did vs. Con on Rapflava in '07 maybe where he viciously robbed me in my only shut out loss on that site ever out of 50 some odd battles there in which I brutally avenged that losses at least 3 times by shut out fashion myself in reg and topical battles. But I digress. Polish to Boot is roflz. Good shit. Not too complex, but didn't need to be. Bones is dope. Again, not too complex, but fresh and very crisp wording. Easily as good as Neigh's or better because Bags is a faggot. Ticks in Boxes is fire. Clever shit and set up well. Outback not fresh, but love the double personal flip and punchline. Smooth as butter. Midol is sick. Great punchline. Backpacks worse line in your verse. No one says someone's back packs up or packs or anything. Just bizarre. Punchline was also a bit too wordy. On to Swerve.
Swerve
Solid 8 is a good flip on a played concept. Well, 8/ate is cum/come ish, is what I meant. Hot Barbie is dope to me. I like it 'cause it's a personal flip. Bar be/Barbie isn't fresh, though, indeed. Canberra is similar to Barbie, although I remember using it actually WITH Dom as my tag partner vs. Damien & Aero in a HOF battle on IHH (a longbar site) enroute to champing the tournament. Mine was something like your bitch can't have a Melbourne or Canberra child... on some Baron bitch Fight Night type shit or something. I don't remember. Parceltongue is decent. Obscure to me, but I see what you did there. Lay D parts in the open is pure fire to me. No idea why it wasn't quoted. Faggots. It's just perfect. Connection works both ways 100%, etc. Hover technique is alright. Concept and connection just aren't as strong as they could be. Idk. Aeropostale is fresh. Giving it points off that alone. Sitting sideways was a good closer, too. Clean connection.
Overall
Close battle and pretty dope. Thought Dom was too consistent here. He had one real slip for me while Swerve had a couple. Both had some fire though and a few lines I really dug. Just thought Dom edged it out on slightly more consistent/better unquotes. Props to both.
/v dominate
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