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Old 11-06-2013, 07:20 PM   #4
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I enjoyed this battle, I felt both verses were dope
one with the shorter view at it, the other long winded
the difference showed and both came with a great idea
I thought the tree was just a tree at first..but then I was like ohhh
illusionist ordeal eh...

Sym, I felt your verse was nice, the fluent vibe you gave off was smooth
you delivered a simple yet idealistically a very potent verse which I enjoyed
I kind of felt that you could have went longer with this and brought more depth
but what you did spoke for itself regardless of length (that's what she said)
a great verse my dude...

DAM, I believe this is the first time I am reading any of your work, at least I think it is,
but either way you didn't disappoint with what you had, it flowed well
it had it's high points and low, but nothing strong enough to impact your verse
it was written perfectly to imperfection, a very strong showing for your first appearance
nice drop

I feel that this really boils down to my interest
who kept it long enough to stay in my thoughts
and I feel like DAm may have done that well enough
Sym delivered a great verse, which seemed poetic
very poetic, it spoke many volumes to me...
but didn't stay captivating enough to win...
maybe a little more focus on the seasons would have helped
either way it was a great battle from both writers....

v/DAM
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