[Mr. J]

This was a nice battle, I felt that both came with different translations of their topic
I felt like this combination of work was wayyyy different then what I had expected
which is great for both writers, both doing a totally unique approach on the pic

Geno, I felt that your take on this matched up with the first
which was dope, although I feel that if someone missed out on the first
they would need to take a step back and read into it, they may miss the point
but your flow was on point the structure of it was well done
and it kept me motivated to continue reading, I hope you are adding more to this
sequels I guess you would say...

ZYG, you always progress through a piece at a different pace
your ideas stand out when you really want to bring the topic to light
your piece seemed a little more abstract to me than anything
which I enjoyed because it's always more open to interpretation
you let the reader decide if what you do will sink in, you have a nice approach
I'm feeling that the transitions are what held your piece together
it came across very fluent to me...nice work

I feel that my vote boils down to what seems more fluid
what carries a more resonating vibe for me, and I feel like I have to give it to ZYG
ZYG came with a very descriptive, well weaved view on the world
a open minded ordeal what seemed to suit my preference at the moment
I really enjoyed Geno's verse as well, but I felt that it became too...idk...angry
I have no problem with it at all both came with great verses...
I just felt like ZYG delivered a more thorough verse...nice battle fellas

v/ZYG