Fresh to Death
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 641
Battle Record: 12-5
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Neighbor
Already used Nightsticks against him, but yours was a clean flip. Hedge fund good concept, but ceiling/weekend doesn't rhyme for me. Ward robe is good. Slightly forced, but clean. Trap house good, rhyming is shakey again though. Deal/flee don't make the same sound to me. Housing bubbles SEEMS good, and probably is, but is obscure to me. Garter/market doesn't rhyme for me again either... Sox line seems like a good current event flip on a not so fresh concept (bases/sex). I don't watch baseball, though, so obscure to me. Shots to the head is dope. Fresh current event spin on a played concept. Patient old as fuck. This is borderline, IMO. On the one hand, I do think him and a lot of others are on that RB faggot's dick to the point of robbing one of their own of his defining HOF moment, but on the other, there doesn't seem to be enough there for me to give it a pass. Jose Aldo would of been fire... if his name was pronounced like that. Jose, for him, since he's Brazilian, and not Mexican, etc, is pronounced Joe zay Al dough. Not hoe zay. Doesn't work. Good attempt, though. Never seen the Alpaca used against Karp. I'm sure it was since I doubt people would lie to make Karp look good and disparage Neighbor, but I personally haven't seen it. So with that said, it's pretty cool. Could of used more of a connection and shouldn't have included the dollar sign since that would make it twenty thousand dollar fur rug, which would ruin the multie. On to Knight's verse.
Allen Knight
I'm guessing a psycho reference from when Christian Bale played him in the remake? Eh, bit too obscure, hardly remember that movie, and def not that scene. The shower scene would be a better bet. Not only that, but Bale lines like that have been done. In fact, I used a Christian Bale line like that a long time ago, like back in '06 on Rapflava vs. Plot in a HW tournament, my second battle there I believe. Boroughs is fresh for me. Only thing I'm not feeling is 'who this bastard hittin slob.' That doesn't make a whole lot ofsense and just seems thrown together to make it rhyme. Ninja Gaiden is a good flip on a current reoccurying theme. That theme being Bags sucking Neigh's dick anywhere and everywhere on Netcees 2.0. I mean look at him in this very thread, chowing down. Only beef with it is that pretty sure Neigh used a Ninja Gaiden line before like it or someone did as I remember it... and I remember all. Bernies seems forced to me. Kind of a weird flip, too. Spending a weekend at his knees. Weird wording. Knees wordplays like that aren't too fresh either. Pucker up is eh. Not really a hard punch and not too creative either. Saying he's too drunk to kiss his girl is pretty soft diss. Not feeling swagger jackers either. Base personal is incorrect, first off. You have it the other way around. If anything, 'Hattan stole Neigh's style. I remember him and BWHAHA came to RF cocky as fuck riding Neigh and Yoda, then got slayed by yours truly. Either way, all them faggots and dull boy all use the same Goldmic style anyway. Then you add all their hardcore fanboys they made on this site and it starts to get quite pathetic. Other than that, wasn't feeling the concept in general. Was obscure to me and didn't seem interesting enough. That and lastly, the multies was pretty bad. militia hit ya sorry (the fuck?) with Melissa McCarthy. Syllables don't even match and 'if his militia hit ya sorry' hardly makes sense. Whatever. World War Z is alright. Not a strong connection. Punchline left something to be desired. Just a single letter nameplay off his real name. You can do better than that. Outworld is alright, too. Punchline line is better. Kind of wordy or something. Idk. Punchline kind of wordy maybe. Idk. Sweet nothings was roflz. Good one. Widows peak lines are pretty old, this one wasn't bad. LOL @ Bags thinking people bite old played lines from him when all his verses are just reworded old Neigh and Blue verses. C'mon, son.
Overall
Eh, wasn't feeling this battle as much as everyone else. Thought both had shitty rhyming/multies and some old lines. At the end of the day, I thought Neigh had better wording/flips and just better/more interesting concepts and punchlines. Allen Knight didn't come as hard as I've seen him come in the past. His Classic verse against me was a lottt better like he tried more knowing he'd have to against auperior opponent. Props to both.
/v neighbor
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