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e11even · 11-06-2013, 02:37 AM

damn. please upload audio once you get to it.

the second four of the hook went harder than the first four of the hook. i don't know if that means you should verse it or keep it, but i think for a trial version you should record this version so i can hear the cadence and conviction in the delivery. afterall, thats what usually makes a good song great. good shit.

11-06-2013, 02:37 AM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	damn. please upload audio once you get to it. the second four of the hook went harder than the first four of the hook. i don't know if that means you should verse it or keep it, but i think for a trial version you should record this version so i can hear the cadence and conviction in the delivery. afterall, thats what usually makes a good song great. good shit. __________________ Ahem.