I liked this, nice grimy new York feel to it, almost like the crack commandments elaborated with higher intelligence
Enjoyed the east reading of it even though there were tons of intricasies, I felt the flow change in my brain seamlessly without wondering how you intended it...
The stomping through a bitch til you kick curbs was a nice visual
And the beginning, pushing rocks like Sisyphus was such a good meta I'm surprised I've not heard it more... But, well, most crack dealing rappers probably aren't much for Greek mythology
If this would've had a hook and a how you got there and what's going on now verse before and after I think this could really kill as a complete track
But its just another sellin substances versequip and the topic is so boring, but you did pull off what you did pretty grand
No complaints in the lyricism, just wanted more really
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