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Old 11-05-2013, 05:07 PM   #4
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Well, I had a fairly in depth review and then my phone rang and it didn't reload what I wrote...

Kuklinski (ice man) / freezin bodies drew me in immediately
Your unorthodox multies where pleasing to the mind ear... But I couldn't translate them to a consistent flow throughout
I've also been asking for acid (real lsd) all year, and no one has it, I'm convinced its gone... But the fake blotter, 2ci analogs are fun to meddle with...
If this had more connective substance aside from a couple serial killers and braggardness it could been pretty damn nice
With all that said, I have to downgrade this to just damn nice

I'm peeing circles with this genius journal
I'll spit the dimensions, you just bleed through the worm holes

This line had my laughing aloud, in a good way
Your weird ass rhymes throughout almost reminded me of some old hot 97 word game stuff, but way smarter and thoughtout
Good work, but not something i'd recommend to my grandma
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