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Originally Posted by Vividlyvague
I would go line by line, but I don't want to further undermine your efforts and intentions. I think if you straightened this verse up it'd have potential, but this was a tough read as is. My apologies for the condescending first statement I first posted. I can be a prick at times.
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Seriously do you have any idea what slang or swag is no matter how its on paper it still sounds the same when you read it aloud. I admit I am more worried about the lyrics then the grammer lmao. Also I think you should look up what a double entendre is. You are so anal about gramar lol
you even corrected my "an" which just simply gives it the swag I intended to have on it.
I didn't realize this was an English class m8
also if your going to correct at least know what your talking about its smallpox btw.