symetrik -
I was fluent in hypocrisy, I practiced every night.
I tattled on my body-doubles when they fled a murder scene with dampened knives.
whoa. where the fuck did that come from? ehhhhh.
I needed a new car, yet I owned art that I honestly despised.
okay. some kind of sense of power, coupled with hatred. leads to it? not really. but close to doing so. what? i don't get it. sorry. i just do not comprehend your angle.
tyson - so you got in an accident - kill somebody - came back from the afterlife - lots of stuff missing in between. but i got the whole story. you might have have put more in between "we rep" and "my blood flowed" cuz honestly i dont really see the connection between then. but i felt comfortable with where you arrived.
so, /v tyson. just felt the story was more complete. although both lacked development, i do understand where tyson went. so i gave him the /v, plain an simple.
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