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Old 11-03-2013, 10:11 PM   #12
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Sym's verse left me wanting more. Either more character build up or more info on the relationship, I just think it fell a littler short literally. Decent writing, was difficult catching rhythm because of the change ups. Tyson, this is one of the better verses I've read from you even though I've only read a few. It had good to decent flow both lyrically and story wise. Good use of topic, solid verse.
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