Zyg - This was rather dry. Tonic and a plain slice of bread. Some clever wording but really this was an amalgam of a fully constructed Zygote-esque statement. Unfulfilling.
Diode - Cool little twist, I found it amusing as I finished reading. I don't think anyone forgets golden showers easily, no matter their generation. Not a great verse but it did it's thing.
Vote - Diode
Clearer and more successful with its message, I thought.
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