Symetrik - Good writing for sure, just not really a thoroughly executed verse. It was short-winded and didn't cover any significant amount of ground for me. Very likeable in some parts though.
Tyson - Bad wording at the end killed your chances of getting my vote. I thought you were gaining enough momentum during the middle but then it sort of simmered down until you ended it. Okay take on the topic.
Vote - Symetrik
because it was different and I liked it more.
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