[PancakeBrah]

zenland -

This was solid to good for a flex piece but for a topical league I felt this was a cop out, a feeling that was only further augmented by the way you shoe horned in the task for the week. Some of the lines and sections were dope, others were a little weak. Opening was strong. Some other portions I'm too lazy to copypaste right now. This was fun to read, but not in keeping with the heart of the league.

adonis -

This was okay. Story was standard fare, nothing exhilarating or new. Rhymes were solid at some points, weak at others. Flashes of good wording tempered by a bit more wonky wording.

v/ Adonis from a purely topical standpoint.