ok guys kinda quickie vote my bad
zenland - I read this verse three times now. ill be honest, idk wtf u were thinking when you posted this. its a obvious keystyle written in a swag and flow style. if this was an OM piece I would say cool. but this had nothing to do with the topic at all. at least as far as could find. I would say you were rushed but you posted it super early so all I could think of was that you were stoned. time to stop experimenting with styles perhaps
Adonis - the story was ok. the rhyming was ok. it was basic but you usually stay on a strict syllable count a lot like me, so that makes it a smooth read. I really don't understand the ending but it doesn't matter. it was infinitely better than what zenland posted. so im not gonna re read it. I have the suspicion you saw his post and coasted to an easy W
vote - Adonis
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