Tryna sneakily do this from work so I might have to do it in parts
Strik:
U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
not bad. cool imagery.
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
heh, cool
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
hah, pretty good. Good execution putting an f work after comp. Woulda been forced without it.
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
concept's nice, feel like the way you included 'sall goodman' was a little awkward but I still dug it
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
ehh nah. wp is a bit familiar and the punch wasn't anything to compansate
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
ehh no... again the wp is a bit familiar. I've used Tibet/to bet before for example
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney
I don't get it. Did a quick google for a beer brand called Daboot but nothing doing... assuming that's how this bar works it's good technically but obv the impact was lost
Overall good swag and rhyming throughout, some good concepts, couple corny/familiar ones but overall a pretty solid showing. Well done
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