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Old 11-03-2013, 12:59 AM   #8
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This was a cool battle both of you have my admiration
Two different styles that almost seem alike in a way
A paradox amongst both of you that holds quite a resonance to me
Breathless you are either improving very rapidly...
Or you are getting comfortable enough to branch out
Regardless your verses continue to impress me...
The way your story carried a long was impressive nice work
Mike I enjoyed your verse as well you seemed to let loose as well
Adding a interesting aspect to your verse and a funny twist
Which I thoroughly enjoyed due to it's surprise ending
Dope work I must add
Both of you kind off edged each other out in a certain way
Topping each others style and somewhat making me back/forth between you two
It's kind of tough but clear enough to see who did work
Ima have to give it to breathless
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