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Old 11-03-2013, 12:15 AM   #8
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This was a decent battle both verses were good for what they were
As far as I'm concerned you both came evenly matched for a lack of attacking the topic
I felt symetriks verse was really straightforward so it kept well grounded
Tyson on the other hand gave his verse a more...abstract feel to it
Which didn't catch on til it seemed to late I admit I would have liked to see more of both writers
You two remain on my radar but Ima have to give it to Sym for dropping a more convincing verse
V/Symetriks
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