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Old 11-02-2013, 07:58 PM   #7
Geno
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Breathles
Loved what you did, had really nice flow to the read, thought the content was great.
No filler, to the point, strong transitions. Actually read this a couple times since its been up. Can't complain

Mike
Your verse was dope, a lot like pancake.. I felt this was going somewhere totally different lmaoo. You had me fucked up when it was simply ketchup on jeans. I thought it was gonna be a murdered my girl verse or something. Good way to pull off the mislead. As far as how you did mechanically, I feel like it was a typical mw verse. Had a simple flow to it and delivery was strong. Felt you could have added some pizzaz to it though, to make it more ntertaining. The verse was tite, but I think breathless edges it. Sry friend, I have to vote for..

V-breathless.
Good battle, props to both
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