WEEK 1 WRITERS BLOCK
written by Genocide
Ok folks, first off -dope ass fucking first week here at the AOB Writers League. Aside from a few no showers, we had some serious verses and really sick battles. This segment is being provided to break down every individual writers first week based on their showing.
So here it is....
Rawn MacDon
Quote:
"She breathed of fresh air, with her high-nose to the crowd
a bacillus of beauty, froze; toes close to the ground
Stood for her ideals, principals, sentiments, truths
Screamed of silent struggles; drowned in cemented shoes"
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a decent show, came short and sweet and perhaps.. just perhaps, may have slept on his a opponant a little bit. Rawn is a seasoned vet who came in last week kind of soft if you ask me, he has the potential to be a problem -but he definitely sized his competitor up the wrong way if you ask me.
Innovator
Quote:
"Finally the day is here, dreams are found; the land of plenty
Is bountiful and beautiful as expected
Naïve eyes see dreams and everything else is neglected
Because you see what is isn’t really presented"
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innovator brought a new set of skills to the table. i say new because i dont think many people are familiar with his writing, and having said that.. is the reason i believe rawn slept on him last week. obviously has skills and is off to a good start. lets see if he can keep up the good work and maintain a winning record.
Frank
Quote:
"Who knows how many noes you had reenacted into shapes -
All I know, is your nose is pointed at the pyramids that backed you in the grave...
Somebody tried to flatten your cosmetic being and crash you out of space
Black or white. Androgynous. Out of wack. Are you insane?"
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one of the more renowned and respected writers here. Frank is a problem in every term of the word and had no problem proving that last week with the v erse he wrote. his style is very unique and of his own. his only problem may be that he holds a very high opinion of himself. hes off to a good start, but can he remain on point and humble enough to capture more wins this season? most likely if you ask me
Mike Wrecka
Quote:
"whether that means climbing or deep sea diving,
from the mountain tops to the depths of the ocean, im trying/
even if it means flying, till me and space are colliding,
im redesigning constellations till our stars are aligning/"
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this guy here is an ole G for real. been around probably as long as i have -if not even longer. ive seen his verses and am very familiar with his work. mike is be coming more and more dangerous with every verse he writes. very sharp and to the point mechanically and conceptually. considering him a push over could be your biggest mistake.
Genocide
Quote:
Only science exists, cause everything is dying or dead
Found a few resources, i macgyvered the rest
Apply and connect, what looks like broken violin necks
And try to invent, with things that show the signs of neglect
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not gonna say to much about myself here, but i think everyone knows whats up. i learned a lot based on the comments i saw in everyones votes last week. werd. GL to erryone this week!
Orc
Quote:
"long after this proprietors gone, the night trickles on scribing the same
hiding it's pain, the story of night is neither gory nor light
- it's silence and rain..
the dark's blinded with change. making way for the brightness of day
the worlds entirely gray, but one mans thoughts give this writer it's page.."
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one of the dopest writers to grace the net, Orc is a highly respected battle writer who is trying his hand at topicals again. he had a sick showing last week, and honestly i was honored to grace the same thread as him with a verse. always a threat, and should never be slept on in any degree. look out for orc to come back strong this week with a more polished verse
c.d.m
Quote:
Time is a funny thing, it can make us forget who we were, and the motivations that move us
It can rust away the chains of the soul, or rush to entwine, so that in time we lose us....
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the mind fuck himself. people might not realise it based on his verse last week, or maybe they do? but this man right here is a very strong writer who if given a second chance, might actually knock the same opponent off that he lost to last week. the guy has a wicked style with vocab to match and even though he faired poorly last week.. stay on the lookout and dont take him as a joke if your matched up with him this week.
dead man
Quote:
it's change, chance, choice to stay and grasp for a source
we understand. but can't describe once we've established rapport
waves lapping ashore. starship silhouettes with shadows aboard
waving goodbye to blue skies, hello axial core
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possibly the most talented man in this league. dead man is a polished, hard to defeat, sick fucking writer who adds some of the dopest descriptions and vivd details ive ever seen in a verse -anywhere. he's favored to champ this league and theres really no arguing with that. the guy has every tool needed to do just that. look out!
Split
Quote:
Distractions- I faltered but I believe time'll tell-
Every blip, chips diminished, stand, think I never will,
Between folded hands- written note on hands, soft as daffodils-
"you couldn't understand how i lost myself"
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split is a sharp writer, the mans content can surprise you at any moment. not always the best mechanics youll ever see, but defini8tely some of the most original and dopest content you can find in a verse. his ideas alone carry the weight of his verses even in the absence of mastered mechanics. hes a problem anywhere you polace him and i wouldnt take him lightly.
Malachi
Quote:
I was 22 she was 19
Dropped out but was bright like lightening
she wanted to be famous with that violin of hers
It never occurred that my vision was blurred.
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malachi is an up and coming writer who is still making a name for himself, a young cat who gets better everytime i read his work. hes still finding himself and gets better with piece he drops. i feel bad for the person he flexes on when he has total control of all his talent
Coup
Quote:
Now today I occupy this table chair in agony
My back turned away against life so anti me
My rib cage is unable to sigh a word to speak
It's stiff outside, hot inside in my chest oblique
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very abstract writer, his ideas will blow your mind based on what i saw from him last week, he has the ability to take the obvious and paint a completely surprising picture of what your already looking in a very different way. didnt fair well last week, but i think he has the potential to really climb the ranks heavy in this league. look out for coup to come back strong in week two and shock the league with some really sick shit
Zenland
Quote:
Through my darkness, I don't choose to be heartless
But the worlds got me chewed up and bruised up destined to lose before I start this
Track called life, Because it turns out I'm burned out and lack all rights
It seems I'm stuck in a dream searchin for facts all night
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this guy reminds me of someone, just not sure yet who. he has a very primed style and definitely attacks his verse with strong, and deliberate content. took his battle last week and completely ran away with it if you ask me. the dude is gonna do well and i wouldnt be surprised to see him in the running for an early champ match in this league. look out for this guy
Kuja
Quote:
'I miss you Steven' whispered the voice of his wife
'When are you coming to join me from that life'
His heart in overdrive, his eyes leaked salty tears
At the sound of her voice which had been absent many years
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was very surprised when i read this mans verse, this is a talent that needs to go noticed. the guy has true skills and its a shame he was no showed last week. the verse he dropped was sick and needs feedback in the OM forum. look out for kuja to make some strong appearances in the weeks to come. ive even seen his name mentioned in champing this league by someone
Hello Kitty
Quote:
A moth alights upon one who's seen fairer days
the color of death - rises as his sclera fades
Thorns surround memories like aloe vera strains
and death's dew contrasts his soul's sahara blaze -
such a curious countenance...a chimera's gaze.
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look, i dont know where this dude came from.. always knew he had skills, but the nyc i remember wasnt this fucking polished and dope. the verse he layed last week was probably imo the verse of the league so far. if you havnt peeped what he dropped yet -you need to do so before you find yourself facing him and not knowing how sick he is. asside from the gay shit he was talking about in the chat thread.. i favor this guy heavily in this league. look out for some serious competition coming from hellokitty
POHFIG
Quote:
She takes the flowers away and puts them in a hour glass vase
Her smile gave a powered display of mascara clouds on her face
I took out my phone to take a pic of her dress full of ass
She pushed out in pose, which sidetracked me into pressing the flash
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another surprise read from last week came from this guy. not sure who he is yet, but i think i might have an idea, and if im right -the leagues in serious trouble. not gonna say anythiing else about it, but he was no showed and dropped one of the sickest stories in the league last week. be careful if you find yourself facing this guy in the weeks to come, i got a feeling he's the alias of one of the sickest writers ive ever had the chance to read. word
Witty
Quote:
My heart it can't recede, this light in the dark is meant for me
My life is in these words, I write my scars to set me free
This book is my life, it's my wand, my suit...it's my strife
Losing my wife and kids, gave me awful blues..
...But I knew I had to choose, and I knew I was right
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if you wanna talk about someone who has a set of skills that speaks for itself, then its definitely gotta be witty. ive faced him in other leagues on other sites and he was always a challenge worth stepping up for. the guy is a problem and his battle was supposed to be the best of the week.. to bad cake no showed him last week.. was it fear? or pure lazyness.. who knows. witty is a threat through. keep your guard up
Camp Bell
Quote:
the lonely witness with the gold appearance and boldest spirit since midas died
i've rode wit niggas in drive-by's as strays find lives of only children, the driver side
high fives, 40 chillen but unknown to them, homie skydived on his co-defendants
i know where the blow was sitting after the drama died but never going to prison
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another up and comer who is trying his hand here in the league. the dude has dope potential, he got no showed and i honestly think he just dropped a quiick verse last week because he expected as much from his opponent. dont take the kid softly though, i think he has what it takes to pull off some serious upsets in the league if he isnt taken seriously. look out for the soup king !
Nigma
Quote:
My work of science was the birth of sniping, certain shot in the dark
Embark on the target, far abroad to the Nazis with the heart of marksmen
Walked in dropping lots from afar, return a carcass from the hardest of targets
I saw their medals glimmer like the eyes of venison shot in the dead of winter
SS lieutenant's in my scopes direction, head was bigger, bend the trigger
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dont know much about this guy. but if he can produce verses the way he did last week at any given time, then he needs to be watched out for. nigma is a new name to me and probably most of the people on this site -but i see good things to come from him and a lotta of losses at his doing
The Following is a list of NO SHOW names.
Unfortunately for them and the rest of the league, they will not be broken down because they did not supply SHIT, nothing, FUCKING NOT SHIT. GodDAMNIT!!!!
Objective
Bleak
Mr Sinister
CakeCakeCake
Rayge
Tyson
Matriarch
Dystopian
and that list of fuck faces pretty much wraps up genos recap of what happened last week, hope yall enjoyed it. peace and GL to the rest of yall. 1