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Old 11-01-2013, 07:45 PM   #2
Mr. J
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Bound to...a seat that I rarely hold ground to
dialect that infects my mind until I come around...
too much on my mind to focus...the room is sound proof
yet echo's loud enough to leave a whole crowd spooked
alone...the feeling will always be far from mutual
far from what you're used to, but I'm committed and useful
forgotten, my biggest achievement is what I give ridicule to
disputed, proof in the puddin', prepare to get a new spoon
get the new scoop and it's possible we see the same substance
share the same ear if the thought could retain abruptness
no more interruptions..
for those tortured the same, know freedom remains abundant
one lock away from escaping the shackles I came cuffed with
dancing to my own theories, creating my own melody
consumed by these hidden voices and what they keep telling me
I act selfishly so in the end their suggestions aren't helping me
that's when I realized how swell it would be...
if you sat in this cell with me & discussed your disgust so eloquently
my...perfect reliance, a partner in crime in the most uncertain of crisis
a visual learner, a worker of the same degree in this perfect silence
someone real, a compassionate counterpart to unnerve my sense
the one retrieving the thoughts behind the curtain..blinded
hidden from view, askew, and parallel to truth
we welcome the future and wave farewell to youth
where the reckless strive and the careless dispute
a reflection of oneself most are too embarrassed to view
only if you understood what I'm sharing with you
carry this burden and I swear..I am forever in debt
an opportunity, if you will, one you'll never regret
a learning experience to the story that never will end
something to cherish forever as we grow better as friends
creating a vendetta to those who only treasure the trend
the plot thickens, and we use any gesture to offend
because at the end of the day this is our immeasurable defense...
especially when placed in this seat, actions remain critiqued
our decisions are our own and we never aim to please
battling these old concepts recreated with adjacent themes...
lacking progress...yet see a way to easily gain release...
it's abominable...ridiculous...and far from new...
do you agree? If you do, then this is the job for you
Critics unite, rejoice in the moment we are apprehending
whether the truth is there or further off than what's transcending
because some movies deserve love...
and.. some stories don't get to have happy endings
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