Holy shit man, this was something else. With the first piece the sheer lyrical content killed it and, honestly, set up the story that I was thinking, yea, right, this is gonna end up corny. But no, you pulled it off so well, I'm actually going to show this to my IRL friends that write. The way you used completely different styles for the different entities was incredible. It read so authentic. Sorta reminded me of some mass effect reapers type stuff with battling replacing the violence. I really liked the ending too with you not winning but being just good enough to allow humanity to continue for another chance. You had so many quotables throughout, but the line that had me dying was when the alien said "make your amends then homo... Sapien.
Fucking amazing
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