Yeah, I think this piece works from both a thematic and technical view. I have too often seen the content drift off into obscurity when dealing with reflective texts like this, but your ability to keep it flow steady with catchy lines kept me reading it.
Favorite bars:
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its pure intuition tellin me here is the mission
to enlist on... It's to figure out if god
is real or if it is not, and if one does exist
then the question is whether its the Christian's or Islam's
the buddhist's or the jew's, the hindu's or wiccan's
even sumerian's or egyptian's, which religion is the truth?
Or maybe they're all wrong, call me crazy for small talk
involvin a lost cause, but I thought I could solve it
Indulge in the knowledge of false prophets who taught gossip
and brought concepts of illogical subconscious nonsense
to the populace. And now I'm here, the modern day nostradamus
Livin in the post date of the predicted apocalypse
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Tho the whole thing was pretty much dope.