Holy shit this is a hard decision....I read both twice an can't really find any flaws in either verse.
Certain, I loved it man, you did well fooling me thinking it was a dude dating a girl out of his league but as it went...he was a cross dresser that used the female persona to live the fun life until it got outta hand, possibly raped? And never did it again...atleast I hope that's right lol I'd love an explanation tho to be sure. Flow was spot on and the imagery and word usage was remarkable. Dope ass drop.
Vulgar, also loved it man. Impeccable flow and another original storyline. Alot of small details most ignore when they write and alot of subtle word plays. Incredible ending, sadly I laughed at it lol just wasn't expecting it so props on the twist.
This was close as fuck an I see this going either way, neither was a clear cut winner IMO. So SOLEY based on entertainment value I gotta vote for certain. The cross dresser really tipped the originality scale a bit and barely gripped me enough for the vote. Huge props to both on this real sjit
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