Netcees - View Single Post - Week 6 - Contender Match - YDK (3-2) vs. Frank (3-2) - FRANK WINS 5-4

Geno · 10-31-2013, 08:11 AM

Ydk
Good verse.
You did well writing, fell hardd at times though towards the ends of verses, it seemed like you just ran out of steem and stoopped caring about the flow of whaat u had going.
Content was cool, I feel like it could have been more creative and different, it seemed like something I've read a million times before, if that makes sense at all?

Frank
Pretty man
You have some of the most. Creative writing abilities I've seen. The story was great, the charracteers and diifferent descriptions were pretty amazing. The mechanics and style you used were great. Never seemed to fall off. Was long as fuck though. Even though not every line was a full line

Gotta vote frank. The concept and skill shined much brighter here
-frank

10-31-2013, 08:11 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Ydk Good verse. You did well writing, fell hardd at times though towards the ends of verses, it seemed like you just ran out of steem and stoopped caring about the flow of whaat u had going. Content was cool, I feel like it could have been more creative and different, it seemed like something I've read a million times before, if that makes sense at all? Frank Pretty man You have some of the most. Creative writing abilities I've seen. The story was great, the charracteers and diifferent descriptions were pretty amazing. The mechanics and style you used were great. Never seemed to fall off. Was long as fuck though. Even though not every line was a full line Gotta vote frank. The concept and skill shined much brighter here -frank __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 11-02-2013 at 08:07 PM.