I spelled 'ripe' wrong when I said riep.
Copy always has a certain flow to his pieces which is unique and adds to the novelty of a piece from Copypat. Though I've read in recent criticism to deadmans pieces he ousts for being 'emo'. I think that's exactly what Copy needs at moments. This piece was pretty dope, though. Of course it was lighthearted. With lots of rhymes and stuff. Which is exactly what was conveyed. At every level it peaked, and sort of gave a vibrant presence to go along with it. Just a lot of long syllablic style going into a paragraph. Very cool. I loved the name dropping.
I’m multi rhymin this up, I’m Dull combined with some Bwah, and Vulgar lines for you Brahs, emulsified when I bust. I ultraviolet you fucks like hotel exposés. Just gorgeously flowed.
Lars piece was very flowy indeed. It's hard to reciprocate. Well, it's hard to give a unique and different perception of a completely different verse from a completely different author. Lars had a more structured verse, nothing really stood out more than any other thing, it just stood out as a whole. Similar to Copy's. The piece was lighthearted, easy to read, and most of all, it just had a scatter-brained linear sentiment that sparked. I liked this verse. Using words like drunkscape is just awesome. Compounding of abnormal webbing is absolutely delight of mine. Keep it up. I loved the middle piece with rotten carcass. I was saying something (but with much more candor) in my head earlier. Great.
Certain was very cool. I saw this version already, but wish the consecutive "I'ms" were added. I think Copy omitted that, though I don't know why. It was cool. Like the other verses, nothing really stands out, This has a different style than the previous two. And perhaps the most off linear one, I loved the transitional shift between internal premise. Such a lovely outcasting of post modern arrogance, bundled up in a bundle of joy, that we know as Certain. The last part was absolutely delightful, at first when I read it, I brushed it off, but once you get into the scheme of things you learn to appreciate subtle little minuscule readings, riddled with couplets of assonance. Stellar.
Split eight, was all over the place, but very contained. I loved his verse, probably the most, he name dropped and was just all over the place while being conditional. Very cool.
Trade up my homies, steam cook their faces, lemon-law with citrus arrangement, capers and codeine. That shimmery shine is simply the greed in my iris. I'm an aikido goliath, chain locks, spit keys and arm-bars.
It's just so, simple. That it's cool. Aikido Goliath got me.
Darth sucks. Why'd he even collab.
Anyway, honestly a lack of criticism. With such a wide range topic, it leaves very little to critique since it's just a fun, quick, easy flex that literally describes how you're feeling in the moment you wrote it.
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