This was cool
Like wise said, had some rouggh areas flow wise -ssuch as..
but if you were to add just a chisel and sculpt
with unadulterated freedom of thought
That was rough to read after smooth syllable plays and transitions that came before it
The content/concepts were cool. Not of the norm, nor was it particularly interesting imo.. which perhaps may only be my opinion... but never the less.
Keep posting, baron
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