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Old 10-30-2013, 11:58 AM   #5
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aw man!! ur last one was a gem.. this one im not sure about... whenever everyone writes about crying i can just never tell if its genuine or not.. is ur life THAT bad??? can't be..ur sitting on the internet text rapping for fun?!?! thats my problem with all these sad "deep" my life sucks shit.. it just seems fake to me... so i dont give a fuck..

ignoring the previous i did like the last line for what its worth, the wording etc on this wasn't overly impressive, the scheming was a tad bland.. just wasn't feeling it my dude..like i say especially compared to that other one u just dropped which i loved, this felt like a step down. hopefully u can "rebound" from this... lol in more ways than one?
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