10-29-2013, 01:47 PM
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#9
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COLTS GANG
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 2,371
Battle Record: 5-6
Rep Power: 0
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lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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To be quite honest, this was immensely one sided. However, a statement as such could be deemed as biased if not substantiated. I will do so with a bar by bar breakdown.
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i rofl at the fact of you being dope on the scaley shit
cause your bars would never make a Magneto, thats the result of ur alias : decent attempt at wordplay in the second line.
you live for the net moments, thats not clever lad
i would take the LIFE out of DEATH, but thats something he's never had : A subtle punch incinuating a lack of a social life
since your shit in the NBL failed, im sharing whats true
you no showed in it & so did we .. its only cause we were embarrased of you : I don't know what NBL is, nor do I care. But... what a nut-shot.
your only 18 you havent been there done that... so whats the act for
he Express'd his feelings .. w/ requesting school field trips to that store : Age-related punch. Not bad.
you short stumpy bastard .. no homo when im popping this chode
your a suburbs kid, whos only claim to the streets was Adopting a Road: Excellent closer. Fantastic.
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ya lines are garbage and u already know this man
i'd donate my two cents but u make a living from recycling soda cans : Good concept doomed by mediocre wording.
GK got ppl thinkin if they meet up irl, they gettin a sword in 'em
but the only time he's killing the competition is when he plays Dynasty Warriors : Don't know what Dynasty Warriors is, but... hell, it fits.
i'm half man half amazing while this dude aint even half of it
while I was King of the Hill... Khan was naming his daughter after him : Attack on the family... not bad.
ya girl claims she a virgin, but put those to rest
her pussy's more accessible than the answers on a take-home test : tired concept.
i'm living lavish, your lifestyle is crule and obsolete
cuz my swag so high ya relatives are dying to make the shoes on my feet : Brutally stupid and useless line, this ruined the whole thing. Bragging about oneself in a battle is weak, and proclaiming to have "swag"? May as well say you don't have any plans of a successful future.
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Khan threw two brutal slobberknockers with bars 3 and 5. 'Neto (I refuse to say the gay "s" word) truly lost it with bars 4 and 5.
The targeted bars aside, the battle was fairly even. But the bars listed REALLY made a difference.
Khan- Not every bar can be a knockout. But your verse was skillfully crafted. Perchance one day we will verbally spar.
'Neto- Practice more. Self-promotion loses battles. The term "battle" stems from the Latin battuere, which means "to beat". Meaning to go on the offense, not play defense.
Vote- GenghisKhan
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that was one of your votes in that battle g
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