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Old 10-28-2013, 02:35 AM   #17
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genocide

audio flow is really snapping now, I'm worried if you are going to be taking serious in this writing league because of it.

this flow was dope

And had a big problem in school, but wrote a column of news
His psychological mood was under doctors review
But the kid was just a product of growth, odder than most

high octane flow but I feel as though it's the same story every time - struggle and perseverance, try writing your next piece from a different space next time.


split

tiny personal details worded poetically, verse had bursts of colors and the writing had a inaccessible relateability to it

Falling in close, I thought of the pause of my touch,
and lovers and love is brushed as broad as dawn and the dusk.

vote went to split,
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