Genocide: As much as it's obvious that you're a great writer, I'm very interested to see how you handle this league because you write a lot of verses like this one, that ultimately are about you. I didn't really see the connection between this verse and the topic, but it was very well written. Your rhyming is off the charts, and here you did it without making anything confusing or forced.
Split Eight: I am not really in the mood for an extensive breakdown, but this is the best thing I've read from you. You kept us in the moment and wrote with graceful poetry and mostly fluid rhymes. A few more anchor points of storytelling might have been nice, but this might be my favorite verse of the week. Plus the tying together of multiple instances of light blue was great.
Vote: Split Eight
This pretty clearly is the battle of the week in my opinion.
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