YDK- Fucking powerful, dude. It started off simplistic as hell and then that FLASH turned shit up. (I'm pressed for time so pardon me...) I really liked this piece. Technically questionable as far as flawless and awe-inspiring, but storytelling really brought it home. Great job.
Zen- This was dope. Teen girl finds out she's prego the night of the prom. That shit hits hard, bro. This resonates with me in volumes. This was crisp, concise, and left enough out to have the reader wanting more. Good stuff.
P.S. Was prom boy the daddy though?? That woulda blown the roof off this battle, lol.
Both of you guys hit this topic pretty hard. We have a double header of life's tribulations this week and you two made it a hard judge. Bottom line, I think my gut is telling me YDK edged it with a more dramatic and thought-provoking entry. You guys did great. MVGT YDK
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