Vote - Mike
Mike, I really liked the angle you took on this, not positive if you were alluding to an oracle of Delphi type scenario with her prophecies actuallt being the product of breathing natural gas in her seer chambers, but regardless of that it was still a nice piece.
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some thought of leaving to swap this misfortune of drought, but whenever they headed towards the route, plants started to sprout, this made some grab their hearts and just start screaming it out, praising the god, while feeling guilty for ever believing these doubts,
Adonis
This was pretty clever, if I understood right, comparing the color to an emotion of angst at being colorblind, but the way you worded some good termed things was awkwardly terrible.
Really liked
Just imagine being def when they sound the alarm...
Clueless til warnings were just an afterthought,
But then with this...
Oblivious to pain that noosed a world a knot,
Slipped her jungle rot while burning her trees...
Those Fiery limbs and boiling skin... Bursting with ease,
It sorta sounds like English isn't your native language
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