Vote - Vulgar (by default)
Straight up lex, if you would've completed this I'm pretty sure you ulda won. Not sure if the font choice was intentional, but right of the bat, I was like Wtf did dude just copy a job orientation letter, then I quickly got where you were going... But then you never went anywhere
Vulgar, this was literally too much, the overmeta/overvocab/overmulti woulda killed if done in moderation. Not that it was wrong, it was just too much man, I had to read it twice just to get what you were going at. And unless I missed something super spectacular with the chin li stuff (aside from kicked and Asian smut) using a name from a video game is just silly in comparison to the rest and was really off putting for me
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