Black, you're just on a whole nother level man. It's like it doesn't stop, it just keeps going. You'd think someone would get bored reading so much from somebody but the shit you drop is always impressive. Immaculate flow. The scheming. The way you put your words together. I thought your A.Madden drop was bananas, but this shit here is even more impressive. I like the piece as a whole. Yes, you started off on the more personal side in the first half, and you used some very impressive lines to really reel it all in. Then the second half just topped off the first part. That transition, which is very clear, was done sooo smoothly and I feel it packed a more content punch whereas the beginning half was personal, laid back. So this piece overall, was an awesome display of complete, conceptual genius. As I mentioned in your other piece I critiqued, I hope to collab with you but I'm gonna hold off on that for now for the right time. Keep drop'n man. I look forward to more of your work.
|