ydk - cool verse, buddy. I don't know how much sense this makes but i thought it was a bit overly done. At the root of it all, it was a verse about guilt (already a very cliche theme, mind you) but it was dressed up (literally) a bit too fancily (is that a word?). So in other words, it was building up, I THOUGHT, to something grand but didn't quite deliver. However, for what it was, it was a great verse. Very straight forward narrative and technically safe. i dig it.
Zenland - I dig these anecdote verse. It basically spoke of a moment. I thought u captured it very well with some brief fast-pace rhyming. Technically i thought it was pretty cool. There were flashes of greatness in terms of rhyming and i'm sure this was only half effort which speaks for the actual skill you possess.
Vote - Zenland. Sure it was short and brief but it was interesting to me. There was a touch of authenticity about it. YDK had a more thorough plot but it was a very cliche'd type of narrative.
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