Wow, I'm pretty shocked here. YDK, I must say, I loved your story. I liked that you really took the time to write as much lines as you needed to tell it because from the beginning to the end, it read like a novel. Very deep & emotional, I liked how you split it in different parts and each presenting a different perspective. The ending, which a lot of people tend to miss on because it comes to sudden or not complete, was the icing on the cake. You said you would bring it and you did. Mechanically solid, your scheme was pretty basic, but the storytelling is what stood out the most. Zenland, you've been rolling lately but here I feel you took a step backwards. Your concept was pretty creative and I didn't really have a full idea of it until it got towards the end, so I give you major points on that but I wish you had more content. It's not that everything in your piece was sudden, but I feel it could have used more meat to really bring that concept to fruition. I wasn't entirely impressed as I was last week with your style, it was a bit more on the simplistic side of things but you were solid. But I feel where you lacked in story, YDK gained and that is where I draw the line in this, YDK really came here and dropped one of the better pieces this week.
MVGT: YDK. Good job by both competitors.
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