Damn, I thought this match would be hella dope but it actually lacked though both parties had some potential. Vulgar, I liked your story but it definitely would have benefited more if you had more lines to round it out. It reads like something that you put together without too much effort, and that's not to say it wasn't good. I liked your descriptions the most but I got lost trying to fully understand your story's direction. But everything else all in all, solid. Lexicon, the first two stanza's actually drew me in. I was like, "okay, this could be very interesting" but then it trailed off into... nothing. The rest lacked in content compared to the first two sections, and as mentioned from others, if you actually took the time to finish this off, you would have got my vote because your concept/approach was very intriguing compared to your opponent's.
MVGT: Vulgar. Good job by both competitors.
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