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Old 10-27-2013, 10:32 AM   #13
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nice battle, i like how vulgar can open with 3 lines and still make it fluid despite the rhyme being on line 3. anyways, i thought vulgar brought a more poetic and skilled piece. The theme of trying to find a woman was consistent and the rhymes were real creative and cool. Don't know if this is semi-autobiographical. Lexicon this is a good piece and you have some intellectual poise here but Vulgar's voice was overpoweringly unique here.

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